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Train Through A Gate by ~MR-GARFEILD:iconMR-GARFEILD:



Train Through a cage, breaks through its gate.
Loses its tracks, only then finds its way.
Its destination determined by its quarreling guests.
Loud, unrelenting, fights and tears at its upholstory.
Rips, Taunts, Destroys. Yet, needed to reachits final stop.
Stations go past, fly past, unremembered.
Yet allows for more passangers, now guests, for the rest of the ride.
More quarreling, fighting, destroying of splendorous, pure upholstory.
Dangerous. WHen there are no tracks.
©2007-2009 ~MR-GARFEILD
:iconmr-garfeild:

Author's Comments

HEY folks

once again this poem sorta came to me with a sudden sorta burst of inspiration after talkin about in a lecture about how influenced we become from everything and everyone around us.

Hence the metaphors of a train going with no tracks and yet guided through its journey by its passengers.

hope u enjoy thuis one...and hopefully everyone out there can bear in mind that no matter what your journey is. Your destination will always be the same.

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