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Head against a brick wall in a familiar park,
i see a girl lying on my lap looking up at me,
smiling at me,
through beautiful eyes that almost change when she is happy,
through lips that seem so soft and light that u feel afraid that they might blow away with her next kiss,

she keeps smiling,
you know this girl,
you smile back,
you think about her every last detail,
you think about why she lays on your lap smiling at you,
while your head leans on the brick wall in this familiar park,
she could be anywhere else in this moment,
but she is here,

you wonder and think how lucky you are,
soo lucky...

again you stare at those eyes,
those eyes that almost seem to change except for when she looks into yours,
©2007-2009 ~MR-GARFEILD
:iconmr-garfeild:

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this is my first poem in almost 2 years folks..
hope yall enjoy it

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:iconbobnoggin:
hats awsum mannnn.... love it xD

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~ "we are, each of us, angels with only one wing, and can only fly by embracing one another" -> embrace me, and we shall fly ^_^

"did u get a gun? i didnt get a gun? where'd u get a gun from..." =P
:iconandydeek:
oh too lazy to think of a title
so typical of you lol

jk jk, i love it..the lines flow well

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:iconmr-garfeild:
hehe...no ur right..i was lazy..i cbf thinkin up a title..i was like fuk i wrote the damn thing why should name it aswell..

u can name it if ya want..Lol

TAKE CARE BUB

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My Desk, My Mess, My Buisness
:iconandydeek:
haha :P fair enough


oy call my home number abt tomoz

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